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I found Corbett’s article on classic rhetoric in the composition classroom to be the most influential for me, of the readings from this week…and no, this is not because it was the shortest of the three. I will be the first to admit that my knowledge of rhetoric is close to nil; my undergraduate studies of rhetoric left me with a sort of lofty definition: “the study of argument”. Now, I know there’s more to it than that, and I could extrapolate a little, but my ability to explain rhetorical studies is vague.
I also agree with and found that I have put into practice his idea that students need a solid, concise thesis statement before they can properly start an academic paper. I actually had them do an exercise in class yesterday (the day I handed out the assignment sheet for the research paper) that guided them through a self-questioning process in order to produce a thesis statement for their yet-unwritten papers.
I would be interested in what our creative writing focused people in this class have to say about his statement, near the end of the paper, of “But hasn’t the cult of self-expression had a fair chance to prove itself in the classroom? How often does the student with creative promise even show up in our classrooms?” He is basically saying, in my opinion, that classic rhetoric methodology should replace the majority of creative expression in academic writing. I don’t think they are mutually exclusive.
It seems like the theme for this week’s reading can be boiled down, yet again, to one word “audience”. In fact that seems to be one of the major themes for this class for the semester. All of which leads me to the question: How do we make a more concrete audience for our students to use for their Comp 110 papers? Or, how do we help them learn to seek their own audience? It seems that audience training is important to the English department here, but not to all of them. So, how do we teach them to help themselves in finding and/or creating an audience for future, non-110 papers?
My responses to the readings for this week were, again, varied. The James Britton article, “Spectator Role and the Beginnings of Writing”, was virtual nonsense to me until we discussed it in class. Maybe it is due to the fact that I just spent three years reading, writing, teaching and grading at a 9th grade level, but I came to grad school with the belief that reading and writing were simply forms of communication and connection. Every discussion I have, both as a grad student and teacher, is showing me that I know nothing.
Emig’s article, “Writing as a Mode of Learning”, was half confusion and half good, common sense. Towards the end of the article, she discusses several points about learning to write that make a lot of sense to me, namely that you have to write at your own pace and that writing is slower than talking, and therefore, allows the learner more time to grasp a concept.
The Elbow article was pretty much the redeeming one for the week, or at least it was the only one that I enjoyed in its entirety. As a cook, a gardener and an English teacher, I found the analogies for the writing process entertaining and beneficial. It also stressed the method of writing until the ideas run out, even if it’s crap, and then revising the information into a written work of art. Trashing one’s written words is hard, even for me, but a necessary part of a successful writing habit (in my humble opinion).
Comp Tales leaves me with very mixed feelings, so far. On one hand, I enjoy reading about the experiences of other teachers. It makes me want to write down some of my favorite, or craziest, experiences as a high school teacher and get them published and out into the world to be seen and understood my the fellows of my profession.
All in all, I finished reading the four assigned chapters feeling discouraged by Haswell and Lu’s collection of stories. In my three years’ experience teaching high school to inner city teens, I have learned that not every child succeeds (at least not in the time that I am acquainted with them). Yet, I have also seen some of the most ‘hopeless’ of kids reach goals beyond their imaginations.